I only read the prologue and the first chapter, and I already question if I'm going to continue reading this.Īside from the very generic start (killed for a reason that is not consistent with what was known of the character, reincarnated in a middle ages world with magic, and gifted with a fairly rare power), the characters are shallow and time skips for the first 10 years (do you seriously have nothing to bring from those first years? that's where you can develop the main character, his family and close. However I would advise to steer clear as this story seem a bit stale, and translation is getting worse. Scratch that, further in the story sentences aren't acceptable too many mistakes and to make it worse they even put red colors on their translation notes (a big glaring red font), what on earth happened to the footnotes a few chapters back. I certainly value good translation in stories as it helps me enjoy it but if you can get passed that then go ahead. You would think why I would include the translation in this review, it is because the translation is all we get if you can’t read the Japanese story and it will greatly affect your enjoyment if the translation is good or not.

Also in the subject of translation the dialogue looks very sloppy, there are better ways to translate stutters in dialogue than this. Make a proper footnotes for the love of Thoth. I know that the translation is free but please make it sensible, it doesn’t help me understand if you leave your translation comments within the story and it is totally irrelevant to the story to make matters worse.

So far the story looks pretty much on a decline 11 chapters in. more> you domesticating them? These are just some of the questionable aspects the story needs to straighten out. Are spirits so obedient that if you can see them they will just help? Are unicorns okay with. The magic used by the main character is also not explained very well, we do know that he is helped by the spirits but it just lacks in some ways. typical Characters from other novels especially the elf. The setting is a bit weak and the characters are meh. I have a really close connection to the MC as this kind of story is very much similar to mine own.

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